KINKY HAIKU

I recently ‘discovered’ Haiku via Twitter and played with the form myself, swapping them with other Haikuists (is that even a word?). I corresponded with the Queen of Haiku, the marvellous @19syllables. The first Kinky Haiku she sent me was this one:

You, close to the edge

Softly, I push you over

Whilst holding your gaze

It made me shiver. In only 17 syllables she had put me right at that moment where a mistress, having got me at my limit, safe word coming to the surface, looks directly into my eyes to watch my reaction as she pushes me over the edge. That immediate creation of both a scene and a feeling is what I strived for in my own efforts.

Here are a few of mine. As I write new ones I will add them so come back some time! Or, for something longer try this

 

ABOUT THE DOM(ME) SUB INTERCHANGE

He’s bound, still, waiting

All fear, excitement, desire

She draws back the whip

 

The next rope tightens

Strain against it, then relax

Deep under her spell

 

Blindfolded, bound, still

Finally, close, he whispers

“Ready, little one?”

 

Floating through subspace.

Each cane stroke a lightning strike

Through the clouds of pain

 

Mistress, my mistress

Guide me through the dark places

Where the safe word lives

 

Pain sharp. Breathing hard

Wrestling the safe-word back down

“Last twenty” she says….

 

THOUGHTS ON SPANKING

Now I know she’s mine

Over my knee her bottom

Rises to meet my hand

 

Colleague, business skirt

We talk shop but in my head

I’m spanking her hard

 

THESE WERE WRITTEN AFTER SESSIONS

Bruises fade away

Leaving vivid blue memories

Of a hard swung cane

 

Post session come-down

Intensity, sensation

Just memory now

 

How shall I find sleep?

Skin alive with sensation

Still smelling of you

 

 

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